Dear Monique,
While I like the concept of your novel, I’m afraid I didn’t have the passionate response to the writing I would need to request more. Fiction is very personal though, and another agent may feel differently. I wish you the best in finding the right home for your manuscript.
Sincerely,
Agent Who E.L. Would Consider "Cra-Zee"
Dear Monique:
Thanks for sending along the opening pages of Peace on Earth. Truth be told, though, I'm afraid they didn't draw me in as much as I had hoped. I'm pressed for time these days and, what with my reservations about the project, I suspect I wouldn't be the best fit. Thanks so much for contacting me, though, and for giving me this opportunity. It's much appreciated, and I'm sorry to be passing. I wish you the very best of luck in your search for representation.
Best,
Another Agent Who Is "Cra-Zee"